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This is a sample announcement of a critique.
== Our Members ==
<pre>
To: pcsar-members@castrov.cuug.ab.ca
Cc: <critique chair>
From: Brett Wuth <wuth@castrov.cuug.ab.ca>
Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 17:58:45 -0700
Subject: Haig Ridge critique
</pre>

Hi All,

Thank you to all that participated on the Haig Ridge Rescue on November
13 and 14.  We'll be holding our critique on Tuesday [date] at 19:00
(7pm) at the Pincher Creek Fire Hall.

This is our regular meeting night.  All members are encouraged to attend
regardless of whether you were involved in this particular incident.
Critiques are often a very good learning opportunity for everyone.

If you cannot attend this meeting, but would like to offer suggestions
around what worked well and should be done again in similar
circumstances or how we can improve our response, please e-mail the
critique chair, [name and e-mail address].

Thanks,
<pre>
-- 
Brett Wuth, President, Pincher Creek Search and Rescue
pcsar@castrov.cuug.ab.ca  Tel:+1-855-727-6825  http://pcsar.webhop.org
Box 1705, Pincher Creek, Alberta, T0K1W0, CANADA
</pre>

== Other Organizations ==
* Identify the other organizations that participated
** look at the incident's report, or review the sign-in sheets
** include the tasking agency

sample message:
<pre>
Cc: <critique chair>
From: Brett Wuth <wuth@castrov.cuug.ab.ca>
To: <contacts>
</pre>

Hi All,

Pincher Creek Search and Rescue was very pleased to work with each of
your organizations on the Haig Ridge Rescue on November 13 and 14.
Thank you.

We customarily host a critique after such incidents so that we can
capture our learnings and be more prepared for future incidents.  Read
more about the critique process Pincher SAR uses here:

http://pcsar.dyndns.org:8080/mediawiki/index.php/Critiques

We'd like to invite you and all organizations that participated in this
incident:

* Alberta Parks
* Alpine Helicopters
* Banff National Park
* Castle Mountain Resort
* Crowsnest Pass Fire/SAR
* Kananaskis Country
* Lethbridge SAR
* Pincher Creek Emergency Services
* Pincher Creek RCMP
* Waterton Lakes National Park

If I've missed anyone please let me know.

The critique will be on Tuesday [date] at 19:00 (7pm) at the Pincher
Creek Fire Hall.  For directions see:

http://pcsar.dyndns.org:8080/mediawiki/index.php/Pincher_Creek_Fire_Hall

If you cannot attend, but would like to offer suggestions around what
worked well and should be done again in similar circumstances or how we
can improve our response, please e-mail the critique chair, 
[chair name and e-mail address]

Thanks,
<pre>
-- 
Brett Wuth, President, Pincher Creek Search and Rescue
pcsar@castrov.cuug.ab.ca  Tel:+1-855-727-6825  http://pcsar.webhop.org
Box 1705, Pincher Creek, Alberta, T0K1W0, CANADA
</pre>

== Subject / Party / Family ==
<pre>
Subject: Haig Ridge critique
To: [party members]
From: Brett Wuth <wuth@castrov.cuug.ab.ca>
</pre>

[contacts' names],

Whenever Pincher Creek Search and Rescue responds to events like the one
on [date]
on [location], 
we later bring the responders
together to review how the response went.  We want to capture as many
learnings as possible so that we are even more prepared for the next
similar incident.  You can learn about Pincher SAR's critique process here:

http://pcsar.dyndns.org:8080/mediawiki/index.php/Critiques

For this incident, we'd like to invite you and your fellow scramblers
that were on the mountain, and of course 
[the subject], if [he/she]'s interested
and able to travel.

Would you be able to forward this invitation to your fellow party members?

The critique will be on Tuesday 
[date[ 
at 19:00 (7pm) at the Pincher
Creek Fire Hall. For directions see:

http://pcsar.dyndns.org:8080/mediawiki/index.php/Pincher_Creek_Fire_Hall

If you or others from your party cannot attend, we'd still very much
like to hear how 
[subject]
and you all are doing, and iany comments you
may have about your experience that can help us in future incidents.
Please e-mail the critique chair, 
[critique chair name and e-mail address].

Thanks,
<pre>
-- 
Brett Wuth, President, Pincher Creek Search and Rescue
pcsar@castrov.cuug.ab.ca  Tel:+1-855-727-6825  http://pcsar.webhop.org
Box 1705, Pincher Creek, Alberta, T0K1W0, CANADA
</pre>

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@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
 This is a sample announcement of a critique.
 == Our Members ==
-sample message:
 <pre>
-Subject: [incident name] critique
 To: pcsar-members@castrov.cuug.ab.ca
-Cc: [critique chair]
+Cc: <critique chair>
+From: Brett Wuth <wuth@castrov.cuug.ab.ca>
+Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 17:58:45 -0700
+Subject: Haig Ridge critique
 </pre>
 Hi All,
-Thank you to all that participated on the
+Thank you to all that participated on the Haig Ridge Rescue on November
-[incident name]
+and 14.  We'll be holding our critique on Tuesday [date] at 19:00
-on [date].
- We'll be holding our critique on Tuesday [date] at 19:00
 (7pm) at the Pincher Creek Fire Hall.
-All members are encouraged to attend
+This is our regular meeting night.  All members are encouraged to attend
 regardless of whether you were involved in this particular incident.
 Critiques are often a very good learning opportunity for everyone.
@@ Line 28: / Line 27: @@
 <pre>
 --
-[your name], Pincher Creek Search and Rescue
+Brett Wuth, President, Pincher Creek Search and Rescue
 pcsar@castrov.cuug.ab.ca  Tel:+1-855-727-6825  http://pcsar.webhop.org
 Box 1705, Pincher Creek, Alberta, T0K1W0, CANADA
@@ Line 40: / Line 39: @@
 sample message:
 <pre>
-Subject: [incident name] critique
+Cc: <critique chair>
-To: [contacts]
+From: Brett Wuth <wuth@castrov.cuug.ab.ca>
-Cc: [critique chair]
+To: <contacts>
 </pre>
@@ Line 48: / Line 47: @@
 Pincher Creek Search and Rescue was very pleased to work with each of
-your organizations on the
+your organizations on the Haig Ridge Rescue on November 13 and 14.
-[incident name]
-on [date].
 Thank you.
@@ Line 88: / Line 85: @@
 <pre>
 --
-[your name], Pincher Creek Search and Rescue
+Brett Wuth, President, Pincher Creek Search and Rescue
 pcsar@castrov.cuug.ab.ca  Tel:+1-855-727-6825  http://pcsar.webhop.org
 Box 1705, Pincher Creek, Alberta, T0K1W0, CANADA
@@ Line 94: / Line 91: @@
 == Subject / Party / Family ==
-sample message:
 <pre>
-Subject: [incident name] critique
+Subject: Haig Ridge critique
 To: [party members]
-Cc: [critique chair]
+From: Brett Wuth <wuth@castrov.cuug.ab.ca>
 </pre>
@@ Line 121: / Line 117: @@
 The critique will be on Tuesday
-[date]
+[date[
 at 19:00 (7pm) at the Pincher
 Creek Fire Hall. For directions see:
@@ Line 138: / Line 134: @@
 <pre>
 --
-[your name], Pincher Creek Search and Rescue
+Brett Wuth, President, Pincher Creek Search and Rescue
 pcsar@castrov.cuug.ab.ca  Tel:+1-855-727-6825  http://pcsar.webhop.org
 Box 1705, Pincher Creek, Alberta, T0K1W0, CANADA
 </pre>